2011年6月9日 星期四
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The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country. As I have dreamed of going to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country; needless to say, there were some unavoidable changes which affected me a lot. To begin with, I got used to the living style of Americans immediately when I got there because the locals were very friendly and easygoing. Consequently, I made friends with lots of people and loved this place right away. Moreover, I improved my English speaking ability day by day, so I could communicate with them fluently. On top of that, I got the opportunity of jobs more easily for I was superior to those who don’t know Chinese. Besides, I could travel all over the world without language barrier by means of speaking English. In this way, I could fully enjoy my trips and broadened my horizon for I contacted different people and different cultures. Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the result was truly what I wanted.
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I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from god.這一句化算是一個大轉折~我覺得還滿有趣的~呵呵~感覺可以為這篇文章增加更多人性~我很喜歡這個際遇~good~
回覆刪除Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there.挖屋xD!!
回覆刪除還不錯~ 沒什麼問題ˊˊˊ
文章還不錯耶~~
回覆刪除不過你前面不是寫take a journey嗎
怎麼後面好像是在寫住在國外阿???
As I have dreamed of coming to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country;
回覆刪除-->As I had dreamed of coming to America, I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country;
those who don’t know Chinese-->those who didn’t know Chinese
and the result was truly what I wanted.
-> and the results were truly what I wanted.
真好~還和男友在國外結婚~
真不錯~
回覆刪除我也好想變得跟妳一樣=)))
這篇文章有把故事寫得很完整~
篇幅也十分廣!!!
很棒喔><
一開始可稍加點前提
回覆刪除On top of這個用法 我覺得挺新鮮的呢 好!
I was satisfied with this decision I made, // I was satisfied with this decision I had made
那什麼時候要生小孩阿XDDDDDDDDDDD
As I have dreamed of going to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country.
回覆刪除--->As I have dreamed of going to America for a long time,I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country.
最後的結局讓某在很羨慕=))
The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country.
回覆刪除>>>文章有頭緒很棒
thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the result was truly what I wanted.
>>>>有寫出你心中的感想
很有順序喔!!
我這次沒有加一耶!
感動吧