2011年6月9日 星期四

Discussing effect - 1

 The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country. As I have dreamed of going to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country; needless to say, there were some unavoidable changes which affected me a lot. To begin with, I got used to the living style of Americans immediately when I got there because the locals were very friendly and easygoing. Consequently, I made friends with lots of people and loved this place right away. Moreover, I improved my English speaking ability day by day, so I could communicate with them fluently. On top of that, I got the opportunity of jobs more easily for I was superior to those who don’t know Chinese. Besides, I could travel all over the world without language barrier by means of speaking English. In this way, I could fully enjoy my trips and broadened my horizon for I contacted different people and different cultures. Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the result was truly what I wanted.

8 則留言:

  1. I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from god.這一句化算是一個大轉折~我覺得還滿有趣的~呵呵~感覺可以為這篇文章增加更多人性~我很喜歡這個際遇~good~

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  2. Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there.挖屋xD!!

    還不錯~ 沒什麼問題ˊˊˊ

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  3. 文章還不錯耶~~
    不過你前面不是寫take a journey嗎
    怎麼後面好像是在寫住在國外阿???

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  4. As I have dreamed of coming to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country;
    -->As I had dreamed of coming to America, I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country;

    those who don’t know Chinese-->those who didn’t know Chinese

    and the result was truly what I wanted.
    -> and the results were truly what I wanted.
    真好~還和男友在國外結婚~

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  5. 真不錯~
    我也好想變得跟妳一樣=)))
    這篇文章有把故事寫得很完整~
    篇幅也十分廣!!!
    很棒喔><

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  6. 一開始可稍加點前提
    On top of這個用法 我覺得挺新鮮的呢 好!
    I was satisfied with this decision I made, // I was satisfied with this decision I had made
    那什麼時候要生小孩阿XDDDDDDDDDDD

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  7. As I have dreamed of going to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country.
    --->As I have dreamed of going to America for a long time,I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country.
    最後的結局讓某在很羨慕=))

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  8. The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country.
    >>>文章有頭緒很棒

    thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the result was truly what I wanted.
    >>>>有寫出你心中的感想

    很有順序喔!!
    我這次沒有加一耶!
    感動吧

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