2011年6月15日 星期三

Discussing effect - 2

 A large change of Acton, a small town in the Midwest is that a large profit-driven factory will be built in the foreseeable future. It will have a great effect on this austere area; in my opinion, I against this idea for some explanations below. Firstly, this big project will affect the locals’ environment where they have been familiar with for a long time. Besides, the residents have to make adjustment for this big change and it will take a great time for them. Secondly, the development of the factory will bring a lot of pollution, such as air pollution, river pollution, garbage pollution and so on. Moreover, the environment will be destroyed on account of the advent of the factory. Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources such as food. Besides, people here will not able to compete with their rivals coming from cities. Last but not least, it is not anyone’s right to damage the harmonious environment which offers many non- artificial things such as beautiful scenery, pure water and fresh air. Therefore, I strong oppose this propose and I hope more people can have consciousness about our nature mother.

8 則留言:

  1. I strong oppose this propose
    I strongly oppose this proposal

    Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources.這句是指什麼短缺呢?整句看起來不太懂

    又是一篇佳作唷

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  2. 找不到什麼錯誤~ 寫得不錯喔
    幫我寫XDDDD (just kidding~)

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  3. 我找不到錯ㄟ= =
    好好喔~
    這兩篇都篇幅廣~內容多~
    真的很棒喔=)

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  4. Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources such as food. People here will not able to compete with their rivals coming from cities.
    我看的懂,可是我覺得這個影響不會發生欸@@!!

    整體很有條理,沒什麼大問題,寫的還不錯~

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  5. be built in the foreseeable future~到現在我還沒有看人家用過~很棒呦=))
    Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources such as food
    這一篇的prospect是偏向哪一方面的意思呢~感覺跟後面的句子有點搭不起來(知識淺薄XDD)
    至於後面的食物短缺我覺得有點太誇張了~
    我也覺得不太可能會發生><

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  6. I strong oppose this propose and I hope more people can have consciousness about our nature mother. --->I strongly oppose this propose and I hope more people can have consciousness about our nature mother.
    然後阿我覺得你寫得很棒!o__<

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  7. 看到了很多新鮮的單字呢!
    用的很好喽:D
    很有條理的文章:)

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  8. 好順暢的文章
    從頭通到底:>

    很棒耶!!!!!!!!!!!

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