2011年6月1日 星期三
Discussing Cause 1
The most important decision I’ve made recently was that I chose my favorite major. Following are some reasons why I made this crucial decision. First, it’s because learning English is my hobby; besides, I often get a sense of achievement when studying this subject. Second, English is an international language that it can become a useful tool to deliver information, such as surf the foreign websites and talk to foreigners. Sometimes you can get the latest news when surfing the Net. Third, English has become the main language nowadays, when you find a job, it is often included in the job requirements. Hence, mastering English can help you find a job much easier. In conclusion, according to what is mentioned above, I’d thought twice before making the decision
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打的很棒喔 :)
回覆刪除文章通順有調理
內容豐富有趣性
:>>>
Sometimes you can get the latest news when surfing the Net. 有點冗贅
回覆刪除最後沒句點xDDDD
文章整篇很通順,轉折處也部會卡卡,很棒!
it can become a useful tool to deliver information
回覆刪除這裡的tool可改用ability~
I’d thought twice before making the decision
結尾句忘了句號喔~
還有可以想個更有力的結尾=)
其他的部分都很不錯喔><
I often get a sense of achievement when studying this subject.我也希望我可以達這種境界(笑)
回覆刪除最後沒句點....
回覆刪除這篇還是沒得挑 而且語句很流暢~~
Third, English has become the main language nowadays, when you find a job, it is often included in the job requirements.
回覆刪除中間應該是句號唷 然後find-->look for 這裡應該是在找工作但還沒找到
難怪英文這麼好~~(羨慕)
其他都很棒~
這篇內容跟之前的比起來比較少但是寫的很順暢^^
回覆刪除愛你喔:">
文法ok:D
回覆刪除只是就我而言 我覺得既然是你的決定 你就可以以第一人稱寫
因為讀起來第二人稱在這裡好沒有說服力喔