2011年5月18日 星期三
Contrasting 1
On account of the new job, I had been looking for a rental house for some time. And there were exactly two rooms to let near my company recently. One is Fairfax APTS and the other is CAMPUS APTS. I had made up my mind to rent the former one for there are some reasons below. First, there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax APTS, while the Campus only has one. If I choose the Fairfax, I can hold a party and invite my friends to celebrate festivals and for fun. Second, the facility of air-conditioner and furnishing are included in Fairfax APTS; in contrast, there is nothing in the Campus APTS. So I will have extra expense if I rent the latter. Third, the former costs $1250 monthly but the latter costs only $900. Though Fairfax APTS is much expensive, but I think the living quality of it is better than CAMPUS APTS. Last but not least, I’m allergic to animals’ fur, so I must choose Fairfax APTS! It’s because I don’t want to sneeze every day. In conclusion, I like the former at first sight, and it have so many advantages so I will live in right away!
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On account of the new job, I had been looking for a rental house for some time.
回覆刪除講義上面好像有標明故事~
是兩個學生在找附近的房子!!!
I had made up my mind to rent the former one for (there are) some reasons below.
括弧中的文字可省~
Last but not least, I’m allergic to animals’ fur, so I must choose Fairfax APTS!
這句挺酷的XD
In conclusion, I like the former at first sight, and it have so many advantages so I will live in right away!
妳選的這間不能馬上使用喔!!!
可以寫I want to live in right away~
比較的部分很清楚~
不過有一些小錯~
改正後就很好喔=)
but I think the living quality of it is better than CAMPUS APTS
回覆刪除-> than that of CAMPUS APTS
so I will live in right away! -> so I will live in it right away!
這篇真不錯呢 連毛毛過敏都寫出來了:D
這篇寫得很好耶~ 沒啥錯誤
回覆刪除而且清楚的表達自己為何會選這間公寓的理由
讓人一目了然
寫的讓人很清楚究可以明瞭你選擇這間公寓的原因喔
回覆刪除很棒耶:)))))
寫的很不錯唷~
回覆刪除每個列點都很清楚
I’m allergic to animals’ fur, so I must choose Fairfax APTS!這句話很有趣喔XD