2011年5月29日 星期日

Expressing an opinion 1

 As a student, you must have thought of “Why we have to wear uniforms for school?” But it is truly necessary for the practical reasons below. The most obvious reason is that wearing uniforms is symbolic of the student of certain school. Whatever you do is a symbol of your school’s reputation. Besides, when your security is threatened, you will be rescued much faster if your identity is specific. Second, it is equal to every student when wearing uniforms. It’s because people ought not to rank them according to their appearances. Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity. For you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style. The final point is that you can save money for your family if your siblings are going to enter your school and you already graduated. Hence, you parents don’t have to afford extra expense. From what is mentioned above, I’m in favor of wearing uniform for school.

8 則留言:

  1. Why we have to wear uniforms for school-->for改to
    然後你寫的好棒喔!感動~

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  2. Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity. For you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style.
    -->是不是要合併呀?Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity for you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style.

    Hence, you parents don’t have to afford extra expense.
    -->Hence, your parents

    超棒!!寫得很好~句子通順文辭優美~句型也是

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  3. 挖賽!!
    = 我沒找到錯誤 =

    = 還從頭讚嘆嘆到尾 = ...


    寫的很好,過你可以看看咪咪嬸嬸的唷~
    她的主題跟你的一樣,有寫到你沒想到的~
    :D 也很棒!!

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  4. 哈! 挑到錯誤了
    倒數第三行you parents 少一個r
    ...好像就這個而已...其他的寫得很好阿~~
    害同學沒得挑= =
    Vera +1 XDDDDD

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  5. Besides寫在第一個有點怪怪的~
    可以用first of all....

    you(r) parents
    少了r喔!!!

    很棒喔=)
    十分通順~思路清晰><

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  6. 很清楚強調制服代表的就是身為一個學生所擁有的紀律與自我~
    每個列點我覺得表達的很GOOD喔><

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  7. 2nd symbolic是形容詞這裡挺怪的 -> symbol
    其他的沒啥問題喽!
    你的文章的列點都挺清楚的呢
    很容易就可以讓人知道你要表達的是什麼

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