2011年4月27日 星期三

Comparing-1

 There are two similar clothes on sale, and both of them are at the price of $34.99. The left one is machine washable, and so does the other one. Thus, it is very convenient for you for it won’t waste your time. Likewise, they’re made from cotton blend. You’ll feel very comfortable when you wear it due to its soft quality. Also, they’re alike in size, which range from 4 to 14. Additionally, their color options are the same as each other. To be specific, they have red, white, navy, and green choices. In conclusion, they are similar in many ways. You can think more clearly before you buy each of them.

9 則留言:

  1. 前面可以多加些劇情~
    像是週年慶或特殊節日拍賣!

    比較的地方很清楚!
    也都有加上補充說明的句子!

    我有試著找出錯誤~
    但是都沒錯喔=)

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  2. and so does the other one. 是SO WAS喔喔~
    然後其他都OK
    是說你的背景綠綠的好舒服:">感動嘛?

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  3. The left one is machine washable, and so does the other one=>so does是so is喔

    寫的簡短有力喔~
    沒有麼錯誤^^

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  4. and so does the other one.-->so is
    笨co打錯了

    其他都很棒除了笨co很好笑

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  5. 都很棒喔!
    樓上的害我笑翻 :>>>>>

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  6. The left one is machine washable, and so does the other one. 同上so is唷~

    第三行for you 又for it 重複感覺不太好,用because吧~

    Likewise, they’re made from cotton blend.這句可以向蔣憶裡那樣變成兩句不知道會不會更好~


    Additionally, their color options are the same as each other. To be specific, they have red, white, navy, and green choices.
    我喜歡你這兩句的寫法,很好!~

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  7. 那你想買哪一件呢??
    (題外話>_<)

    比較的地方很清楚!
    連接每一句的詞用的超讚的!!
    很棒喔!

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  8. and so does the other one
    //and so is the other one

    Thus, it is very convenient for you for it won’t waste your time.
    我比較喜歡同一句子裡不要有重複的字,可以把後面的for改別的: )

    每個資訊都補充了各自的優點呢:D
    真棒!

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  9. 第三行 it is very convenient for you for it won’t waste your time
    後面的for可以改成because 用字就不會重複

    其他的沒啥問題阿~

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