Best of the semester - 3

　Many people may have the same experience about meeting others online; indeed, it’s a common way to make friends nowadays. Besides, it becomes the fastest way to get along with your friends. Hence, I agree with meeting people through online dating sites, and there are some following reasons. First, today’s technology is advanced, meeting people online may help you jump on the bandwagon. It’s because you can broaden your horizon by meeting different people and get the latest information and gossip. Second, you can know the friend who you are talking to more clearly online before you go out to have a date with him/her. It may minimize the risk of meeting bad guys. Third, when you face something unpleasant but shy to talk to your friends, you can turn to your friends online and take your frustration, sadness or complaints out on Net. In sum, I’m on the same page as those who like to make friends online.

Best of the semester - 2

　As a student, you must have wondered “Why we have to wear uniforms for school?” But it is truly necessary for the practical reasons below. The most obvious reason is that wearing uniforms is symbolic of the student of certain school. Whatever you do is a symbol of your school’s reputation. Besides, when your security is threatened, you will be rescued much faster if your identity is specific. Second, it is equal to every student when wearing uniforms. It’s because people ought not to rank them according to their appearances. Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity for you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style. The final point is that you can save money for your family if your siblings are going to enter your school and you already graduated. Hence, your parents don’t have to afford extra expense. From what is mentioned above, I’m in favor of wearing uniform for school.

Best of the semester - 1

　There is no denying that almost everyone learns English all over the world, and thus English has become the commonest language nowadays. It is considered that English is the most important language, and I am no exception. Below are some reasons for which I think it is crucial. Firstly, English is an international language for it is the mother tongue for most of the critical countries. By virtue of learning English, it will enable you to communicate with foreigners without efforts and you can also make friends with them. Secondly, you will have access to job opportunities more easily if you’re good at English. It is because mastering certain important language is one of the essential requirements of jobs. Thirdly, you can travel around the world without worrying language barrier. Not only is it very enjoyable for you to travel around by yourself, but you can become independent and more competent to deal with many things. Besides, you can advance your English oral ability abroad. Last and most important, you can broaden your horizon such as knowing international news or important events in the world. According to above explanations, I’m convinced that learning English is a correct choice, and I will keep on going.

Discussing effect 2 - Revised

　A large change of Acton, a small town in the Midwest is that a large profit-driven factory will be built in the foreseeable future. It will have a great effect on this austere area; in my opinion, I’m against this idea for some explanations below. Firstly, this big project will affect the locals’ environment where they have been familiar with for a long time. Besides, the residents have to make adjustment for this big change and it will take a great time for them. Secondly, the development of the factory will bring a lot of pollution, such as air pollution, river pollution, garbage pollution and so on. Moreover, the environment will be destroyed on account of the advent of the factory. Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources such as food. Besides, people here will not able to compete with their rivals coming from cities. Last but not least, it is not anyone’s right to damage the harmonious environment which offers many non- artificial things such as beautiful scenery, pure water and fresh air. Therefore, I strongly oppose this propose and I hope more people can have consciousness about our nature mother.

Discussing effect 1 -Revised

　The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country. As I had dreamed of going to America for a long time, I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country; needless to say, there were some unavoidable changes which affected me a lot. To begin with, I got used to the living style of Americans immediately when I got there because the locals were very friendly and easygoing. Consequently, I made friends with lots of people and loved this place right away. Moreover, I improved my English speaking ability day by day, so I could communicate with them fluently. On top of that, I got the opportunity of jobs more easily for I was superior to those who didn’t know Chinese. Besides, I could travel all over the world without language barrier by means of speaking English. In this way, I could fully enjoy my trips and broadened my horizon for I contacted different people and different cultures. Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the results were truly what I wanted.

Discussing Cause 2 -Revised

　On September 5, Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs. Nevertheless, it didn’t last long and he closed his shop on September 19. Hence, according to this situation there are some analyses below. The most obvious point is that the location is definitely not a good place. It’s because the shop is situated on the small side street just outside of town. Furthermore, it is near a shopping center that has two large music stores. The small shop can’t be compared to the music stores for they are big and in good location. Second, the music style of CD is not so popular with the local residents because the majority of the locals are at the age of 51~60. However, there are still some teenagers but they don’t have the ability to purchase because they are too young. Third, the opening time is absolutely a critical point when it comes to the income of the shop. It only opened during Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 p.m. But this period didn’t attract a lot of people to visit. Many people prefer to go shopping when they have free time, especially on weekends. Finally, on account of not accepting checks or credit cards, Michael got fewer guests. Many people will consider it is not convenient for they don’t want to bring too much cash on hand. From what is mentioned above, the reasons why his shop closed down are very apparent and I think he should think twice before starting another biz.

Discussing Cause 1 -Revised

　The most important decision I’ve made recently was that I chose my favorite major. Following are some reasons why I made this crucial decision. First, it’s because learning English is my hobby; besides, I often get a sense of achievement when studying this subject. Second, English is an international language that it can become a useful tool to deliver information, such as surf the foreign websites and talk to foreigners. Sometimes you can get the latest news when surfing the Net. Third, English has become the main language nowadays; when you look for a job, it is often included in the job requirements. Hence, mastering English can help you find a job much easier. In conclusion, according to what is mentioned above, I’d thought twice before making the decision.

Expressing an opinion 2 - Revised

　Many people may have the same experience about meeting others online; indeed, it’s a common way to make friends nowadays. Besides, it becomes the fastest way to get along with your friends. Hence, I agree with meeting people through online dating sites, and there are some following reasons. First, today’s technology is advanced, meeting people online may help you jump on the bandwagon. It’s because you can broaden your horizon by meeting different people and get the latest information and gossip. Second, you can know the friend who you are talking to more clearly online before you go out to have a date with him/her. It may minimize the risk of meeting bad guys. Third, when you face something unpleasant but shy to talk to your friends, you can turn to your friends online and take your frustration, sadness or complaints out on Net. In sum, I’m on the same page as those who like to make friends online.

Expressing an opinion 1 - Revised

　As a student, you must have thought of “Why we have to wear uniforms for school?” But it is truly necessary for the practical reasons below. The most obvious reason is that wearing uniforms is symbolic of the student of certain school. Whatever you do is a symbol of your school’s reputation. Besides, when your security is threatened, you will be rescued much faster if your identity is specific. Second, it is equal to every student when wearing uniforms. It’s because people ought not to rank them according to their appearances. Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity for you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style. The final point is that you can save money for your family if your siblings are going to enter your school and you already graduated. Hence, your parents don’t have to afford extra expense. From what is mentioned above, I’m in favor of wearing uniform for school.

Discussing effect - 2

　A large change of Acton, a small town in the Midwest is that a large profit-driven factory will be built in the foreseeable future. It will have a great effect on this austere area; in my opinion, I against this idea for some explanations below. Firstly, this big project will affect the locals’ environment where they have been familiar with for a long time. Besides, the residents have to make adjustment for this big change and it will take a great time for them. Secondly, the development of the factory will bring a lot of pollution, such as air pollution, river pollution, garbage pollution and so on. Moreover, the environment will be destroyed on account of the advent of the factory. Thirdly, many people will move in this small town owing to the prospects of the jobs offered by the factory, which will result in the shortage of resources such as food. Besides, people here will not able to compete with their rivals coming from cities. Last but not least, it is not anyone’s right to damage the harmonious environment which offers many non- artificial things such as beautiful scenery, pure water and fresh air. Therefore, I strong oppose this propose and I hope more people can have consciousness about our nature mother.

Discussing effect - 1

　The biggest transition of my life is that I came to an English-speaking country. As I have dreamed of going to America, so I was very glad to have the opportunity to take a journey to a foreign country; needless to say, there were some unavoidable changes which affected me a lot. To begin with, I got used to the living style of Americans immediately when I got there because the locals were very friendly and easygoing. Consequently, I made friends with lots of people and loved this place right away. Moreover, I improved my English speaking ability day by day, so I could communicate with them fluently. On top of that, I got the opportunity of jobs more easily for I was superior to those who don’t know Chinese. Besides, I could travel all over the world without language barrier by means of speaking English. In this way, I could fully enjoy my trips and broadened my horizon for I contacted different people and different cultures. Last but not least, I met my boyfriend in the United State and we also got married there. I thought I was so lucky that it was a gift from God. In sum, I was satisfied with this decision I made, and the result was truly what I wanted.

Contrasting 2 - Revised

I’m looking for an excellent English instructor for my school. Therefore, there were many people sending their resumes to me. After selecting there were still two resumes left, which were from Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines. However, they had bothered me for a few days. Both of them are pretty good but major in different fields. Finally, I made the decision and employed the latter. It’s because the level of education of Debra is higher than Lynn. I think Debra had mastered English for she had studied in three English-related Universities. In contrast, Lynn only studied Spanish which I don’t put so much emphasis on when I look for an English instructor. Besides, the employment experience of the latter is much more than the former. Based on much working experience, I’m convinced that Debra is capable of doing a new job and she’ll adapt to new environment faster than Lynn. What’s more, Debra’s has some publications such as English Verb Tenses is included. This is what I focus on and want to present to the audience of our school. In conclusion, I prefer the person who masters English deeply, and Debra is my ideal choice.

Discussing Cause 2

On September 5, Michael Williams opened a small music store selling compact discs. Nevertheless, it didn’t last long and he closed his shop on September 19. Hence, according this situation there are some analysis below. The most obvious point is that the location is definitely not a good place. It’s because the shop is situated on the small side street just outside of town. Furthermore, it is near a shopping center that has two large music stores. The small shop can’t be compared to the music stores for the music stores are big and in good location. Second, the music style of CD is not so popular with the local residents because the majority of the locals are at the age of 51~60. However, there are still some teenagers but they don’t have the ability to purchase for they are too young. Third, the opening time is absolutely a critical point when it comes to the income of the shop. It only opened during Monday to Friday from 1 to 5 p.m. But this period didn’t attract a lot of people to visit. Many people prefer to go shopping when they have free time, especially on weekends. Finally, on account of not accepting checks or credit cards, Michael got fewer guests. Many people will consider it is not convenient for they don’t want to bring too much cash on hand. From what is mentioned above, the reasons why his shop closed down is very apparent and I think he should think twice before starting another biz.

Discussing Cause 1

　The most important decision I’ve made recently was that I chose my favorite major. Following are some reasons why I made this crucial decision. First, it’s because learning English is my hobby; besides, I often get a sense of achievement when studying this subject. Second, English is an international language that it can become a useful tool to deliver information, such as surf the foreign websites and talk to foreigners. Sometimes you can get the latest news when surfing the Net. Third, English has become the main language nowadays, when you find a job, it is often included in the job requirements. Hence, mastering English can help you find a job much easier. In conclusion, according to what is mentioned above, I’d thought twice before making the decision

Expressing an opinion 2

　Many people may have the same experience about meeting others online; indeed, it’s a common way to make friends nowadays. Besides, it becomes the fastest way to get alone with your friends. Hence, I agree with meeting people through online dating sites, and there are some following reasons. First, today’s technology is advanced, meeting people online may help you jump on the bandwagon. It’s because you can broad your horizon by meeting different people and get the latest information and gossip. Second, you can know the friend who you are talking to more clearly online before you go out to have a date with him/her. It may minimize the risk of meeting bad guys. Third, when you face something unpleasant but shy to talk to your friends, you can turn to your friends online and take your frustration, sadness or complaints out on Net. In sum, I’m on the same page as those who like to make friends online.