Expressing an opinion 1

　As a student, you must have thought of “Why we have to wear uniforms for school?” But it is truly necessary for the practical reasons below. The most obvious reason is that wearing uniforms is symbolic of the student of certain school. Whatever you do is a symbol of your school’s reputation. Besides, when your security is threatened, you will be rescued much faster if your identity is specific. Second, it is equal to every student when wearing uniforms. It’s because people ought not to rank them according to their appearances. Third, wearing uniforms means discipline and unity. For you’re in a big group; therefore, you must wear uniform to stand for your school’s style. The final point is that you can save money for your family if your siblings are going to enter your school and you already graduated. Hence, you parents don’t have to afford extra expense. From what is mentioned above, I’m in favor of wearing uniform for school.

Comparing 3 - Revised

Compared to my two cousins, Melody and Winnie, are quite similar to each other. Melody and Winnie are 10 and 8 years old respectively. Speaking to their appearance, Melody has big eyes and little mouth which just as Winnie has. Besides, they are very white and have short hair. When it comes to their figures, both them are slim and short. The former is 25 kilograms and 130 centimeters, and the latter is just shorter than Melody by 2 centimeters but of the same weight. Likewise, their personalities have no obvious difference. Melody is a kind of girl who is shy, quiet and polite, and Winnie has no exception. Additionally, they are easygoing and generous when you really understand them. According to above descriptions, you can more or less understand them. Though it’s hard to tell the apparent characteristics between them, they’re worth knowing. I think whoever will like them when become their good friends. So I’m delight in being their cousin.

contrasting-2

　I’m looking for an excellent English instructor for my school. Therefore, there were many people sent their resumes to me. After selecting there were still two resumes left, which were from Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines. However, they had bothered me for a few days. Both of them are pretty good but major at different fields. Finally, I made the decision and employed the latter. It’s because the level of education of Debra is higher than Lynn. I think Debra had mastered English for she had studied three English-related Universities. In contrast, Lynn only studied Spanish which I don’t put so much emphasis on when I look for an English instructor. Besides, the employment experience of the latter is much more than the former. Based on much working experience, I’m convinced that Debra is capable of working new job and she’ll adapt to new environment faster than Lynn. What’s more, Debra’s has some publications such as English Verb Tenses is included. This is what I focus on and want to present to the audience of our school. In conclusion, I prefer the person who masters English deeply, and Debra is my ideal choice.

Contrasting 1

　On account of the new job, I had been looking for a rental house for some time. And there were exactly two rooms to let near my company recently. One is Fairfax APTS and the other is CAMPUS APTS. I had made up my mind to rent the former one for there are some reasons below. First, there are two large bedrooms in Fairfax APTS, while the Campus only has one. If I choose the Fairfax, I can hold a party and invite my friends to celebrate festivals and for fun. Second, the facility of air-conditioner and furnishing are included in Fairfax APTS; in contrast, there is nothing in the Campus APTS. So I will have extra expense if I rent the latter. Third, the former costs $1250 monthly but the latter costs only $900. Though Fairfax APTS is much expensive, but I think the living quality of it is better than CAMPUS APTS. Last but not least, I’m allergic to animals’ fur, so I must choose Fairfax APTS! It’s because I don’t want to sneeze every day. In conclusion, I like the former at first sight, and it have so many advantages so I will live in right away!

Comparing 3

　Compared to my two cousins, Melody and Winnie, are quite similar to each other. Melody and Winnie are 10 and 8 years old respectively. Speaking of their appearance, Melody has big eyes and little mouth which just as Winnie has. Besides, they are very white and have short hair. When it comes to their figures, both them are slim and short. The former is 20 kilograms and 130 centimeter, and the latter just shorter than Melody by 2 centimeter but of the same weight. Likewise, their personalities have no obvious different. Melody is a kind of girl who is shy, quiet and polite, and Winnie has no exception. Additionally, they are easygoing and generous when you really understand them. According to above descriptions, you can more or less understand them. Though it’s hard to tell the apparent characteristics between them, but they’re worth knowing. I think whoever will like them when become their good friends. So I’m delight in being their cousin.

Comparing 2 - Revised

　When it comes to the important persons in America Revolution, John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are included. They’re similar to each other in many ways. First, both them were delegates to the Continental Congress. Moreover, they were signers of Declaration of Independence. Second, John studied and practiced law, and Thomas was no exception. Third, John’s and Thomas’s position were alike. Rather, they were presidents of the United States. Finally, it’s a coincidence that they both died on July, 4, 1826. To sum up, according to above information we can know their spirit and devotion. No wonder they’re still respected by the public nowadays.

Comparing 1 - Revised

　It’s an annual anniversary of the Happy department store, so there are many things on sale. At the Department of Clothing are two similar clothes on sale, and both of them are at the price of $34.99. The left one is machine washable, and so is the other one. Thus, it is very convenient for you because it won’t waste your time. Likewise, they’re made from cotton blend. You’ll feel very comfortable when you wear it due to its soft quality. Also, they’re alike in size, which range from 4 to 14. Additionally, their color options are the same as each other. To be specific, they have red, white, navy, and green choices. In conclusion, they are similar in many ways. You can think more clearly before you buy each of them.

Why is learning English important - Revised 1

Almost everyone learns English all over the world, and thus English has become the commonest language nowadays. It is considered that English is the most important language, and I am no exception. Below are some reasons for which I think it is crucial. Firstly, it is an international language for it is the mother tongue for most of the critical countries. By virtue of learning English, it will enable you to communicate with foreigners without efforts and you can make friends with them. Secondly, you will have access to job opportunities more easily if you’re good at English. It is because mastering certain important language is one of the essential requirements of jobs. Thirdly, you can travel around the world without worrying language barrier. Not only is it very enjoyable for you to travel around by yourself, but you can become independent and more competent to deal with things. Besides, you can advance your English oral ability abroad. Last and most important, you can broaden your horizon such as knowing international news or important events in the world. According to above explanations, I’m convinced that learning English is a correct choice, and I will keep on going.